Tuesday, 11 January 2022

Poetry slam! First + Second Day

 Kia Ora Koutou

This is my first poetry slam! I look forward to sharing it with everyone here. I used two cartoon characters, Bugs Bunny And Daffy Duck. In my Clerihew poems. I hope you enjoy!

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  1. Kia ora Chris. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poems. I like the way you presented them with a large image for the background and your voice was nice and clear. Ka pai!. Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!

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  2. Kia Ora Chris,

    It’s Charlotte here, a blog commenter for Manaiakalani. Awesome job on your work on the ‘Poetry slam’ activity!

    The poems you created were very cool! I can tell that you have put a lot of work into them. I like that even though you used very colourful backgrounds, you could still read the text clearly!

    How did you find this task? Do you have any helpful hints or tips for anyone else trying this task?

    Ngā Mihi Nui
    Charlotte Visser
    Summer Learning Journey

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    1. For me it helped to watch a cartoon / video to refresh my memory and write down ideas about the characters I chose for my poem.

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